I thought I would be a screenwriter but I wasn’t very good at it, so instead I'm critiquing every film I watch with a harsh, heavy hand.
There’s a different angle on this that makes it a more complete story because there were so many unnecessary or dragged out elements that made it feel messy.
I hate when people say this but I think this would have been a better pilot and the bulk of the show could have been the company they started. You can even have it end the same way!
I think it also took itself too seriously.