About 30 minutes too long. Just about everything fell flat. If you aren't going to try just wrap it up a little faster.
Going to try not to nitpick pick this and keep it simple. If you liked this thats fine just means we disagree on something. For me Mary Rey Sue ruined this for me. Awful and poorly written character.
"How'd you get away?"
"I can't explain it and you wouldn't believe me"
Yeah nope nope that was the last straw. Take her out and this would've been good. I understand some might say its because we know nothing about her and…