i love u neil
This failed to get to me. I think it’s fun and daring, and I like that but the dialogue needs improvement.
The story comes off a little vague because the characters plans and motive weren’t clear enough. They aren’t likeable, and you can’t find a reason to root for them to win. The last shot of Sue Ramirez would have been more impactful if we’ve gotten to know her character better. It was already strong and fitting but it just wasn’t enough.