Herzog, bruh, script doctors can't be that expensive!?
Quick tips for next time:
- When writing for a native English speaker, sprinkle some contractions in there. An "I'm" or a "they're" once in a while won't hurt anyone.
- Should the whole story rely on the dude kidnapping the professor just so he can explain the importance of her own research to her?
- Lawrence Krauss uses a wheelchair, but only when he 'gets tired of life'. I don't think this was meant to be funny, so, why is it here?
- Cut self-evident lines like "everything will fall into place" to save time and money!